In my opinion I think you've made some nice moves and also done a bit too much in others. Physical Veteran RD is a very good UFA move and we can 100% pay up for it. Tanev, Demelo, Chatfield maybe?, etc... Good move there. Stretcher...IDK I guess if he's not playing a ton. I'd prefer to keep Kaiser / Del Mastro playing more at the NHL than give time to Stretcher, but in case of injury I guess...ok. Rittich. I'd pass. Give Commesso/Stauber time at the NHL level. A specific set amount of game to get them more used to the NHL level goaltending. If Mrazek gets hurt...fine, but only then. The forward group IMO has too many UFAs. I'm good with either Marchessault or Bertuzzi getting signed, but pass of Roslovic for sure and Motte...I'd prefer to go elsewhere if we're looking for a 4th liner. Nazar should play a year in Rockford imo. He's looked good in his two games at the NHL level, but that really doesn't mean a whole lot at this point. Get him a full year in their system and getting more physically mature. He's going to have to learn to grind a bit more. He and Bedard quite frankly, but it'll just take time for that part of the game to develop.

Some very solid moves here, but as @exo2769 said, just too many UFA signings. One of Marchy or Bert ok. Not both. If Nazar is going to be the 2C, then Dickinson is the 3C for sure. So no need for Roslovic. If Tanev will sign here, then pass on Stecher. And trading away Donato to bring in Motte seems luke a downgrade to me. Rather keep Donato. Rest looks good though!